First Draft Of Double Page Spread

Here is my first draft of my double page spread with no context in it. Its not a very good draft therefore I went back to my teacher to get sonme advice on how to improve it. one thing I did wrong was not analysing other magazines to get an example of what should be and look like a double page spread. therefore learning from my mistakes I went and looked at a couple of magazines however the main magazine I used was 'terrorizer' which I mainly was looking at the layout rather then the context as I had already done my research on the context I needed to used. Therefore I decided to re-do the whole double page spread using a different layout but the same context which would make the double page spread look more professional.