Changes that need to be made

When looking at my first draft of my music magazine, I went around asking a couple people of what they though i could do to improve on it. I asked my teacher for some professional advice. I also thoght it would be a good idea to ask my friends as they are intially the same as my target audience so their input would be very useful in improving the magazine cover as it would give me an insight in what the target audience are attracted to.