First draft to magazine cover

Here is my first draft on my school magazine. 
the colours used were throughly thought about due to the point of how i wanted to get the idea of my magazine across such as the fact that school is a fun place therefore I used a black  background in order to contrast the main picture of a student so it stands out on the cover.
Additionally the fonts of the writing were also vital as my main stories needed to be eye catching therefore using a red bold font would be the best way to get attention as it stands out as well.
There are a couple changes that need to be made in order to perfect it which i will do when i get feed back from people about it.
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